Friday, April 6, 2007

Another entry (*eye roll at nick*)

yeah max was stabbed in her fight with the evil...thing. i don't know why though. FNICK, just wants her to die now! :L even though thats not how its supposed to happen! *sigh* and he says that he doesn't want max to die*eye roll* in our version max slowly dies AFTER like a month,...she wasn't suffering the whole time! it was happy-ish time...then keen "died", max started to die, nudge wouldn't eat , neither would Tristan. Tristan was cutting, Aletta saw Tristan, he didn't care, keen isn't dead, Tristan/ nudge happy. max dies. thats out version. nicks- basically skip the months or however long it was of happiness so max doesn't "suffer" *eye roll* and i agree ,Fnick: write your chapter of ghost so that I can read it. oh and write more max too. and everyone: think of ideas for the new one. I currently have...none. very annoying actually.

(mwa ha i changed the color...again)

3 comments:

Fnick said...

ok ok i wont shorten it... il like, get rid of her being wortally wounded... and il go through the whole keen ness and whatever... besides it means i have one less awkward chapter to write

Jen said...

:D sweet

ClaireG said...

Yeay...fun fun.....